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“Elevate Your TOEFL
Writing with Focused
Practice and
Personalized Feedback”

Introduction
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With dedication, practice, and a willingness to
receive feedback, you can unlock your potential and
become a master of the written word
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With
the right approach, you can refine your writing
skills, master the art of sentence structure, improve
your vocabulary, and become a confident writer
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So start now, and

embark on the journey to unlock your full writing
potential!”
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Reading and analyzing high-scoring TOEFL writing samples is a great way to
understand the format and structure expected in a TOEFL essay
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Here are some examples of high-scoring TOEFL writing samples:
An essay that discusses the advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city
An argumentative essay that supports the idea of having a four-day workweek
A persuasive essay that argues the importance of learning a second language
By analyzing these samples, you can gain a better understanding of the following:

The structure of a well-organized TOEFL essay: including an introduction, body
paragraphs, and conclusion
The language used in a high-scoring essay: including proper grammar, vocabulary,
and sentence structure
The tone of a successful TOEFL essay: including conciseness, clarity, and
coherence
Use cases for studying high-scoring TOEFL writing samples:

Improving your writing skills for the TOEFL exam: By reviewing these samples, you
can understand the writing style, tone, and structure expected in a TOEFL essay
and improve these skills
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Gaining inspiration for your writing: Seeing the different topics and styles used in
high-scoring essays can help you generate new ideas for your paper
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Write regularly to improve your writing speed, accuracy, and fluency
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Regularly practicing can enhance your writing speed, accuracy, and fluency
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Examples of writing activities to improve your writing skills:
Journaling: Write daily about your thoughts, experiences, or anything you find
interesting
Blogging: Write and publish regular blog posts on a topic you are passionate
about
Writing essays: Practice writing TOEFL-style articles on different topics to improve
your writing skills
Use cases for writing regularly to improve your writing skills:

Improving writing speed and accuracy: By writing regularly, you can develop your
writing speed, accuracy, and fluency
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Building confidence in your writing: Writing regularly can help you build
confidence in your writing skills, which is essential for the TOEFL exam and
beyond
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A clear and well-organized essay is essential for a high score on the TOEFL writing
section
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Additionally, it would be best to use appropriate linking words and
phrases to connect your ideas and create a cohesive essay
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Well-developed body paragraphs: Each paragraph should have a clear topic
sentence supporting your thesis and be developed with evidence and examples
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Cohesive use of linking words and phrases: Use words and phrases such as "in
addition," "on the other hand," and "moreover" to connect your ideas and create
a cohesive essay
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Improving communication skills: A clear and well-organized essay effectively
communicates your ideas and arguments, an essential skill for the TOEFL exam
and beyond
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One of the ways to demonstrate your mastery of English is by using a varied
vocabulary, including collocations and idiomatic expressions
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Examples of demonstrating mastery of English through vocabulary:

Using advanced vocabulary words: For example, instead of saying "happy," use
"euphoric
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Using idiomatic expressions: For example, "once in a blue moon" instead of "very
rarely
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Showcasing language proficiency: Demonstrating mastery of English through
vocabulary can show that you have a good understanding of English and can use
advanced vocabulary accurately and appropriately, which is an essential skill for
the TOEFL exam and beyond
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Enhancing writing style: Using a varied vocabulary can add depth and interest to
your writing, making it more engaging for the reader
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Revise and edit your work, focusing on grammar, vocabulary, spelling, and
punctuation
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Once you
have finished your essay, you should take the time to review it, focusing on
grammar, vocabulary, spelling, and punctuation
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By revising and editing your work, you can ensure that you
submit your best possible report on test day
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Reviewing vocabulary: Check for word choice and ensure that the language used
is appropriate for the topic
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Reviewing punctuation: Checking for proper use of commas, semicolons, colons,
etc
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Enhancing communication skills: Revising and editing your work can help you
communicate your ideas and arguments more effectively, an essential skill for the
TOEFL exam and beyond
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Building confidence: By revising and editing your work, you can be confident that
you are submitting your best possible essay, which can increase your confidence
on test day
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Seek feedback from peers, teachers, or online TOEFL writing forums to get
insights and suggestions for improvement
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You can ask peers and teachers or participate in
online TOEFL writing forums to get feedback on your paper
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This can help you identify your strengths and
weaknesses, allowing you to focus on areas that need the most improvement
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You are asking teachers: Seeking feedback from an English or writing teacher on
your essay
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Use cases for seeking feedback from others:

Improving TOEFL scores: By seeking feedback from others, you can identify areas
that need improvement and make changes to your writing that can help you earn
a higher score on the TOEFL writing section
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Identifying strengths and weaknesses: Feedback from others can help you identify
your strengths and weaknesses, allowing you to focus your efforts on areas that
need the most improvement
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Practicing writing within the 30-minute time frame of the TOEFL writing section is
essential for building your endurance and speed
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Examples of practicing writing within the 30-minute time frame:

Timed writing exercises: Set a timer for 30 minutes and practice writing an essay
within that time frame
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Use cases for practicing writing within the 30-minute time frame:

Improving time management skills: By practicing writing within the 30-minute
time frame, you can learn to manage your time more effectively, which is
essential for the TOEFL writing section and other timed writing assignments
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Improving writing speed: By practicing writing within the 30-minute time frame,
you can develop your writing speed and become more efficient at putting your
ideas down on paper
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Writing essays on a range of topics, both academic and general interests, can help
improve your writing flexibility
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This can
also help you become more confident in your writing abilities and more adaptable
to writing on various topics
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General interests: Writing essays on topics of personal interest, such as hobbies,
travel, or current events
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Developing writing skills: Writing on different topics can help you improve your
writing skills in organization, argumentation, and style
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Enhancing knowledge: Writing on topics of personal interest can help you deepen
your knowledge and understanding of the world around you
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Use the suggested resources, such as TOEFL writing practice tests and software,
to gain additional practice and feedback
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These resources can help you gauge
your progress and identify areas that need improvement, allowing you to focus on
areas that need the most work
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Writing software: Writing software checks your essay for grammar, vocabulary,
and other aspects of language usage and provides suggestions for improvement
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Identifying areas for improvement: The feedback provided by these resources can
help you identify areas that need improvement, allowing you to focus your efforts
on areas that require the most work
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Preparing for the real test: Using TOEFL writing practice tests can help you
become familiar with the format and time constraints of the actual TOEFL writing
section, making you feel more confident and prepared on test day
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Incorporate transitional words and phrases to improve the coherence and
unity of your writing
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These words and phrases help connect your
ideas and create a flow in your essay, making it easier for the reader to
understand your arguments
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Examples of transitional words and phrases include: "furthermore," "in addition,"
"in contrast," "on the other hand," "similarly," "therefore," "as a result,"
"consequently," etc
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Use cases:

We are connecting supporting points to the main argument in a body paragraph
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Consequently, it is
important to make physical activity a regular part of our daily routine
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For example, "In conclusion,
the evidence clearly shows the benefits of a healthy lifestyle
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They show a relationship between causes and effects
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As a result,
individuals spend more time in front of screens and less time physically active
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For example, "On one hand, traditional
education focuses on lectures and memorization
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By incorporating transitional words and phrases, you can create a smoother and
more cohesive flow in your writing, making it easier for the reader to understand
your arguments and follow your thought process
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Pay attention to the tone and style of your writing, making sure it is formal
and appropriate for academic writing
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The tone of your essay should be formal and
objective, avoiding the use of slang, colloquialisms, or overly personal opinions
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"Using renewable energy sources is a viable solution for reducing carbon
emissions
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"Renewable energy is like the best thing ever for the environment
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Utilizing examples and evidence is an essential aspect of supporting your
arguments
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For
example:
"The use of wind turbines has been shown to reduce carbon emissions in
countries like Denmark and Germany significantly
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"Studies have shown that recycling has a positive impact on the environment,
reducing the amount of waste sent to landfills and conserving natural resources
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Use a clear and concise writing style, avoiding unnecessary words and
phrases
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Avoiding unnecessary words and phrases can help create a more
efficient and straightforward essay
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Write: "Many people are now concerned about climate change
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Use sentence variety and length, avoiding repetitive sentence structures
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Avoiding repetitive sentence structures,

such as always starting sentences with the exact words, can help create a more
exciting and engaging essay
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Climate change affects the
migration patterns of birds
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Could be revised to:

"The impact of climate change on wildlife is significant, affecting migration
patterns of birds and food sources for many animals
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Plan your essay, organize your ideas, and create an outline before you start
writing
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This can include creating a thesis statement, outlining the main
points and evidence you will use to support your argument, and organizing your
ideas in a logical sequence
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Introduction

Definition of renewable energy
Importance of renewable energy
II
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Specific Renewable Energy Sources

Wind Energy
Solar Energy
Hydro Energy
IV
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Continued investment in renewable energy is necessary for a sustainable future
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Pay attention to the writing task's instructions and criteria, ensuring you
answer the prompt effectively
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This means carefully reading the
instructions and understanding the task requirements, such as the length of the
essay, the type of response required (e
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, agree or disagree), and the essay’s
primary focus
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You need to clearly state your position and provide evidence to support your
argument, such as:
"I agree with the statement that technology has had a positive impact on society
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Additionally, technology has made many
aspects of our lives easier and more convenient, such as online shopping and
access to information
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Using descriptive language to create an exciting and vivid picture of your ideas
and arguments can help to make your writing more exciting and memorable
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For example:
"The wind turbines tower over the rolling hills, capturing the energy of the wind
and turning it into a source of clean energy
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Focusing on writing in an academic tone, and avoiding informal language and
slang, is crucial for creating a professional and credible essay
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For example:
Instead of: "Global warming is a real problem, and we gotta do something about
it
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Using quotes, paraphrasing, and summarizing are effective ways to demonstrate
your understanding of the text and support your arguments
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Summarizing consists in reducing the text to its central ideas
and key points
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Paraphrase: "Renewable energy sources have been demonstrated to be an
effective means of decreasing carbon emissions
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Reviewing your writing regularly is essential in improving your TOEFL writing skills
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This can involve self-review, seeking feedback from
peers or teachers, and using online resources such as writing practice tests and
software
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