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Title: Pearson Edexcel Level 3 GCE 9ET0/03 English Literature Advanced PAPER 3: Poetry June 2024 + MARK SCHEME
Description: Mark Scheme (Results) Summer 2024 Pearson Edexcel GCE In English Literature (9ET0) Paper 3: Poetry

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Pearson Edexcel Level 3 GCE

Friday 14 June 2024
Afternoon (Time: 2 hours 15 minutes)

English Literature

Paper
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9ET0/03
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Advanced

PAPER 3: Poetry

You must have:
Prescribed texts (clean copies)
Source Booklet (enclosed)

Total Marks

Instructions

Use black ink or ball-point pen
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Answer one question in Section A and one question in Section B
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• In your answers, you must not use texts that you have used in your coursework
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marks for each question are shown in brackets
• The
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Post‑2000 Specified Poetry
Answer ONE question
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EITHER
1 Read the poem Stillwater Cove by Ada Limón on page 2 of the source booklet and
reread the anthology poem Out of the Bag by Seamus Heaney (on pages 3–5)
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(Total for Question 1 = 30 marks)

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2 Read the poem Stillwater Cove by Ada Limón on page 2 of the source booklet and
reread the anthology poem From the Journal of a Disappointed Man by Andrew
Motion (on page 6)
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Answer ONE question on your chosen text
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You must select a poem from the prescribed list for your studied collection
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Medieval Poetic Drama
Prescribed texts
Everyman and Medieval Miracle Plays, editor A C Cawley
OR
English Mystery Plays: A Selection, editor Peter Happé
EITHER
3 Explore the presentation of God’s instructions in the extract specified below and in
one other extract of similar length from any of the poetic dramas
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Refer to the prescribed text studied:
either
Cawley: Noah’s Flood (Chester) lines 113–144
or
Happé: Noah (Chester) stanzas 15–18
(Total for Question 3 = 30 marks)

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4 Explore the presentation of suffering and hardship in the extract specified below and
in one other extract of similar length from any of the poetic dramas
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Refer to the prescribed text studied:
either
Cawley: The Second Shepherd’s Pageant (Wakefield) lines 55–99
or
Happé: The Second Shepherd’s Play stanzas 7–11
(Total for Question 4 = 30 marks)

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Medieval Poet: Geoffrey Chaucer
Prescribed text
The Wife of Bath’s Prologue and Tale, editor James Winny
EITHER
5 Explore the ways in which Chaucer presents attitudes towards marital love in The Wife
of Bath’s Prologue and Tale, by referring to lines 77–114 and one other extract of
similar length
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(Total for Question 5 = 30 marks)
OR
6 Explore the ways in which Chaucer presents the significance of physical appearance
in The Wife of Bath’s Prologue and Tale, by referring to lines 586–626 and one
other extract of similar length
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The Metaphysical Poets
Prescribed text
Metaphysical Poetry, editor Colin Burrow
EITHER
7 Explore the ways in which longing is presented in The Pulley by George Herbert and
one other poem
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(Total for Question 7 = 30 marks)
OR
8 Explore the ways in which natural imagery is used in To My Mistress Sitting by a River’s
Side: An Eddy by Thomas Carew and one other poem
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(Total for Question 8 = 30 marks)

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Metaphysical Poet: John Donne
Prescribed text
John Donne Selected Poems
EITHER
9 Explore the ways in which Donne presents separation in Song (‘Sweetest love
I do not go’) and one other poem
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(Total for Question 9 = 30 marks)
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10 Explore the ways in which Donne presents strong emotions in The Apparition and one
other poem
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The Romantics
Prescribed text
English Romantic Verse, editor David Wright
EITHER
11 Explore the ways in which attitudes to ageing are presented in So We’ll Go no more
A Roving by Lord Byron and one other poem
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(Total for Question 11 = 30 marks)
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12 Explore the ways in which melancholy is presented in Ode on Melancholy by
John Keats and one other poem
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Romantic Poet: John Keats
Prescribed text
Selected Poems: John Keats, editor John Barnard
EITHER
13 Explore the ways in which Keats presents the power of nature in On the Sea and one
other poem
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(Total for Question 13 = 30 marks)
OR
14 Explore the ways in which Keats presents desire in The Eve of St Agnes and one other
poem
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The Victorians
Prescribed text
The New Oxford Book of Victorian Verse, editor Christopher Ricks
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15 Explore the ways in which poets present yearning in Maud: I
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The poems are listed
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Pearson Edexcel Level 3 GCE

Friday 14 June 2024
Afternoon (Time: 2 hours 15 minutes)

Paper
reference

English Literature

9ET0/03
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Advanced

PAPER 3: Poetry
Source Booklet
Do not return this Booklet with the question paper
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SECTION A
Post‑2000 Specified Poetry
Stillwater Cove
It seemed a furtive magic—
sun ricocheting off cresting waves near
Stillwater Cove, the soft rock cliffs
of sandstone and clay, the wind‑tilted
cypress trees leaning toward
the blue Pacific—and it was only you
who’d see them
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We’d whine that we never
caught a glimpse of a slick back or tail slap,
nary a spy‑hopping head raised
above the swirling surface
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It was your trick, always a whale
as soon as our heads went down
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Distracted
by the evidence of life at our feet,
we had no time for the waiting
that was required
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Now, I am
in the inland air that smells of smoke
and gasoline, the trees blown leafless by
wind
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He’d arrive with it, disappear to the room
And by the time he’d reappear to wash
Those nosy, rosy, big, soft hands of his
In the scullery basin, its lined insides
(The colour of a spaniel’s inside lug)
Were empty for all to see, the trap‑sprung mouth
Unsnibbed and gaping wide
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Until the next time came and in he’d come
In his fur‑lined collar that was also spaniel‑coloured
And go stooping up to the room again, a whiff
Of disinfectant, a Dutch interior gleam
Of waistcoat satin and highlights on the forceps
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At which point he once turned his eyes upon me,
Hyperborean, beyond‑the‑north‑wind blue,
Two peepholes to the locked room I saw into
Every time his name was mentioned, skimmed
Milk and ice, swabbed porcelain, the white
And chill of tiles, steel hooks, chrome surgery tools
And blood dreeps in the sawdust where it thickened
At the foot of each cold wall
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Poeta doctus Peter Levi says
Sanctuaries of Asclepius (called asclepions)
Were the equivalent of hospitals
In ancient Greece
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Or of the cure
By poetry that cannot be coerced,
Say I, who realized at Epidaurus
That the whole place was a sanatorium
With theatre and gymnasium and baths,
A site of incubation, where ‘incubation’
Was technical and ritual, meaning sleep
When epiphany occurred and you met the god
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And then as he dipped and laved
In the generous suds again, miraculum:
The baby bits all came together swimming
Into his soapy big hygienic hands
And I myself came to, blinded with sweat,
Blinking and shaky in the windless light
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I didn’t want
To leave the place or link up with the others
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I wanted nothing more than to lie down
Under hogweed, under seeded grass
And to be visited in the very eye of the day
By Hygeia, his daughter, her name still clarifying
The haven of light she was, the undarkening door
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Me at the bedside, incubating for real,
Peering, appearing to her as she closes
And opens her eyes, then lapses back
Into a faraway smile whose precinct of vision
I would enter every time, to assist and be asked
In that hoarsened whisper of triumph,
‘And what do you think
Of the new wee baby the doctor brought for us all
When I was asleep?’

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From the Journal of a Disappointed Man
I discovered these men driving a new pile
into the pier
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Everything else was in the massive style
as well, even the men; very powerful men;
very ruminative and silent men ignoring me
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Nevertheless, by paying close attention
to the obscure movements of one working
on a ladder by the water’s edge, I could tell
that for all their strength and experience
these men were up against a great difficulty
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Every one of the monsters
was silent on the subject – baffled I thought
at first, but then I realised indifferent
and tired, so tired of the whole business
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I should say I watched them at least an hour
and, to do the men justice, their slow efforts
to overcome the secret problem did continue –
then gradually slackened and finally ceased
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No one spoke; no one said what they saw;
though one fellow did spit, and with round eyes
followed the trajectory of his brown bolus
(he had been chewing tobacco)
on its slow descent into the same depths
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he turned on his heel and walked away
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then altogether, the men followed
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Poems of the Decade: An anthology of the Forward books of poetry 2002–2011
(Faber and Faber, 2015) ISBN 978‑0571325405 / ISBN 978‑0571281732
Poem title

Poet

Pages
New Edition

Old Edition

Eat Me

Patience Agbabi

3

13

Chainsaw Versus the Pampas Grass

Simon Armitage

6

16

Material

Ros Barber

10

20

History

John Burnside

25

35

Julia Copus

37

47

Tishani Doshi

43

53

Ian Duhig

51

61

Helen Dunmore

52

62

U A Fanthorpe

57

67

Vicki Feaver

62

72

The Furthest Distances I’ve Travelled

Leontia Flynn

64

74

Giuseppe

Roderick Ford

66

76

Seamus Heaney

81

91

Alan Jenkins

92

102

Genetics

Sinéad Morrissey

125

135

From the Journal of a Disappointed Man

Andrew Motion

127

137

Daljit Nagra

129

139

Ciaran O’Driscoll

132

142

On Her Blindness

Adam Thorpe

170

180

Ode on a Grayson Perry Urn

Tim Turnbull

172

182

An Easy Passage
The Deliverer
The Lammas Hireling
To My Nine‑Year‑Old Self
A Minor Role
The Gun

Out of the Bag
Effects

Look We Have Coming to Dover!
Please Hold

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Pre‑1900 – The Medieval Period
Medieval Poetic Drama: answer question 3 or 4
Everyman and Medieval Miracle Plays, editor A C Cawley (Everyman, 1993)
ISBN 9780460872805
Poem title

Poet

Page number

Noah’s Flood (Chester)
The Second Shepherds’ Pageant (Wakefield)

33
Anon

The Crucifixion (York)

75
137

English Mystery Plays: A Selection, editor Peter Happé (Penguin Classics, 1975)
ISBN 9780140430936
Poem title

Poet

Noah (Chester)
The Second Shepherds’ Play

Page number
118

Anon

The Crucifixion

265
525

Medieval Poet – Geoffrey Chaucer: answer question 5 or question 6
The Wife of Bath’s Prologue and Tale, editor James Winny (Cambridge, 2016)
ISBN 9781316615607
Poem title
The Wife of Bath’s Prologue
The Wife of Bath’s Tale

8

Poet
Geoffrey Chaucer

Page number
38
64

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Pre‑1900 – Metaphysical Poetry
The Metaphysical Poets: answer question 7 or 8
Metaphysical Poetry, editor Colin Burrow (Penguin, 2006) ISBN 9780140424447
Poem title

Poet

Page number

The Flea

4

The Good Morrow

5

Song (‘Go and catch a falling star’)

6

Woman’s Constancy

7

The Sun Rising

8

A Valediction of Weeping

19

A Nocturnal Upon St Lucy’s Day, Being the
Shortest Day

John Donne

21

The Apparition

22

Elegy: To his Mistress Going to Bed

29

‘At the Round Earth’s Imagined Corners’

31

‘Death be not Proud’

32

‘Batter My Heart’

33

A Hymn to God the Father

36

Redemption

67

The Collar

78

The Pulley

George Herbert

79

Love III

87

To My Mistress Sitting by a River’s Side: An Eddy

89

To a Lady that Desired I Would Love Her

Thomas Carew

A Song (‘Ask me no more where Jove bestows’)
A Letter to her Husband, Absent upon Public
Engagement

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Anne Bradstreet

135

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Metaphysical Poetry, editor Colin Burrow (Penguin, 2006) ISBN 9780140424447
Poem title
Song: To Lucasta, Going to the Wars

Poet

Page number

Richard Lovelace

182

The Nymph Complaining for the Death of her
Fawn
To His Coy Mistress

195
Andrew Marvell

The Definition of Love

201

Unprofitableness

219

The World

Henry Vaughan

To My Excellent Lucasia, on Our Friendship
A Dialogue of Friendship Multiplied
Orinda to Lucasia

10

198

220
240

Katherine Philips

241
242

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Metaphysical Poet – John Donne: answer question 9 or 10
John Donne Selected Poems (Penguin Classics, 2006) ISBN 9780140424409
Poem title

Poet

Page number

The Good Morrow

3

Song (‘Go and catch a falling star’)

3

Woman’s Constancy

4

The Sun Rising

6

The Canonization

9

Song (‘Sweetest love I do not go’)

12

Air and Angels

15

The Anniversary

17

Twicknam Garden

20

Love’s Growth

24

A Valediction of Weeping

28

Love’s Alchemy

John Donne

29

The Flea

30

A Nocturnal upon St Lucy’s Day, Being the
Shortest Day

33

The Apparition

36

A Valediction Forbidding Mourning

37

The Ecstasy

39

The Funeral

45

The Relic

48

Elegy: To His Mistress Going to Bed

80

Holy Sonnet I (‘Thou hast made me’)

177

Holy Sonnet V (‘I am a little world’)

179

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John Donne Selected Poems (Penguin Classics, 2006) ISBN 9780140424409
Poem title

Page number

Holy Sonnet VI (‘This is my play’s last scene’)

179

Holy Sonnet VII (‘At the round earth’s
imagined corners’)

180

Holy Sonnet X (‘Death be not proud’)

181

Holy Sonnet XI (‘Spit in my face, you Jews’)

12

Poet

John Donne

182

Holy Sonnet XIV (‘Batter my heart’)

183

Goodfriday, 1613
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Alfred Prufrock

D H Lawrence
Marianne Moore

T S Eliot

Time does not bring relief; you all have lied…
Recuerdo
Wild Swans

50
64
64
68
68
78

Edna St Vincent
Millay

78
79

The Fawn

79

in Just

86

what if a much of a which of a wind
pity this busy monster, manunkind

18

Page number

E E Cummings

86
87

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The Great Modern Poets, editor Michael Schmidt (Quercus, 2014)
ISBN 9781848668669
Poem title

Poet

Stop all the Clocks
Lullaby
Musée des Beaux Arts
The Shield of Achilles

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114

W H Auden

114
115
116

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Modernist Poet – T S Eliot: answer question 21 or 22
T S Eliot: Selected Poems (Faber, 2009) ISBN 9780571247059
Poem title

Poet

Page number

The Love Song of J
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The Burial of the Dead

T S Eliot

41

II
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The Fire Sermon

48

IV
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What the Thunder said

54

The Hollow Men

65

Ash‑Wednesday

71

Ariel Poems:
Journey of the Magi (1927)

20

87

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Post‑1900 – The Movement
The Movement: answer question 23 or 24
The Oxford Book of Twentieth Century English Verse, editor Philip Larkin with
foreword by A Motion (OUP, 1973) ISBN 9780198121374
Poem title
Hospital for Defectives
Felo De Se
Horror Comic
Man and Woman

Poet
Thomas Blackburn

Robert Conquest

Page number
484
485
496
497

Toads

537

Coming

538

At Grass

538

Take One Home for the Kiddies

Philip Larkin

539

Nothing to be Said

540

The Whitsun Weddings

540

Apology for Understatement

555

Au Jardin des Plantes
A Song about Major Eatherly

John Wain

556
557

Brooklyn Heights

562

Delay

563

Song at the Beginning of Autumn

563

Answers

Elizabeth Jennings

564

The Young Ones

564

One Flesh

565

Photograph of Haymaker 1890
Giant Decorative Dahlia

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Molly Holden

569
570

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The Oxford Book of Twentieth Century English Verse, editor Philip Larkin with
foreword by A Motion (OUP, 1973) ISBN 9780198121374
Poem title

Poet

Metamorphosis
London is full of chickens on electric spits

584
Peter Porter

Your Attention Please
Warning

Jenny Joseph

Farewell to Kurdistan

22

609
610

George Macbeth

When I am Dead
Story of a Hotel Room

585
585

The Miner’s Helmet
The Wasps’ Nest

Page number

611
611

Rosemary Tonks

617
617

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The Movement Poet – Philip Larkin: answer question 25 or 26
Philip Larkin: The Less Deceived (Faber, 2011) ISBN 9780571260126
Poem title

Poet

Page number

Lines On A Young Lady’s Photograph Album

1

Wedding‑Wind

3

Places, Loved Ones

4

Coming

5

Reasons for Attendance

6

Dry‑Point

7

Next, Please

8

Going

9

Wants

10

Maiden Name

11

Born Yesterday

12

Whatever Happened?

Philip Larkin

13

No Road

14

Wires

15

Church Going

16

Age

18

Myxomatosis

19

Toads

20

Poetry Of Departures

22

Triple Time

23

Spring

24

Deceptions

25

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Philip Larkin: The Less Deceived (Faber, 2011) ISBN 9780571260126
Poem title

Poet

Page number

I Remember, I Remember

26

Absences

28

Latest Face

29

If, My Darling

Philip Larkin

30

Skin

31

Arrivals, Departures

32

At Grass

33

Source information, Section A:
‘Stillwater Cover’ from The Hurting Kind by Ada Limón, Corsair 2022
‘Out of the Bag’ from Electric Light by Seamus Heaney, 2001, Faber & Faber Ltd
‘From the Journal of a Disappointed Man’ from The Cinder Path, Andrew Motion, 2009, Faber & Faber Ltd
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Mark Scheme (Results)
Summer 2024

Pearson Edexcel GCE
In English Literature (9ET0)
Paper 3: Poetry

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Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• comparison of how the act of observing is presented by the observer, e
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the
‘furtive magic’ in Stillwater Cove; the personal, diaristic observations in From the
Journal of a Disappointed Man
• ways in which language is used to present the act of observing, e
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repetition of
‘massive’ in the Motion poem to show the limits of the speaker’s observation;
listing of flora and fauna to demonstrate the keen observation of the speaker in
Stillwater Cove
• ways in which poets use tone to express their observations, e
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exaggerated
importance attached to the actions of the men in From the Journal of a
Disappointed Man; rueful observation of the older speaker looking back in
Stillwater Cove ‘we had no time for the waiting/that was required’
• comparison of the poets’ use of setting of the observations, e
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the spring time
visit to the cove; the pier in From the Journal of a Disappointed Man
• ways in which imagery is used in the poems, e
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the significance of the pile left
in ‘mid-air’ in the Motion poem; the unhealthy air and ‘leafless’ trees in the
speaker’s present in Stillwater Cove
• comparison of ways in which the act of observing is frustrating, e
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the speaker
not seeing the whales in Stillwater Cove; the speaker not able to understand the
‘secret’ he is observing in From the Journal of a Disappointed Man
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Descriptor (AO1, AO2, AO4)

Level 1

1–6

Descriptive
• Makes little reference to texts with limited organisation of ideas
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• Uses a narrative or descriptive approach that shows limited
knowledge of texts and how meanings are shaped in texts
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• Demonstrates limited awareness of connections between texts
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Level 2

7–12

General understanding/exploration
• Makes general points, identifying some literary techniques with general
explanation of effects
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Organises and expresses ideas with clarity, although still
has errors and lapses
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Shows general understanding by commenting on straightforward
elements of the writer’s craft
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Makes general crossreferences between texts
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Relevant use
of terminology and concepts
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• Demonstrates knowledge of how meanings are shaped in texts with
consistent analysis
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• Makes relevant connections between texts
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Level 4

19-24

Discriminating controlled application/exploration
• Constructs a controlled argument with fluently embedded examples
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Controls structures
with precise cohesive transitions and carefully chosen language
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Analyses, in a controlled way, the nuances and
subtleties of the writer’s craft
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Takes a controlled discriminating
approach to integration with detailed examples
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Evaluates the effects of literary features with sophisticated
use of concepts and terminology
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• Exhibits a critical evaluation of the ways meanings are shaped in
texts
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• Evaluates connections between texts
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Medieval Poetic Drama
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriate selection of similar length passage on presentation of suffering
and hardship, e
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First and Third Shepherds’ lament on the weather; Jesus’
suffering in The Crucifixion
• ways in which the Shepherd uses language to express his suffering and
hardship, e
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‘weathers are spitous’; ‘frosts so hideous’
• humorous presentation of married men as suffering and in distress, e
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‘Woe
is him that has bun’
• ways in which suffering and hardship of the shepherds’ lives would reflect the
hardship of the contemporary audience, adding to the relevance of the
Medieval Mystery dramas
• ways in which suffering and hardship are part of the cycle of forgiveness and
redemption throughout the whole drama
• ways in which the dramatic nature of the Shepherd’s monologue helps
enhance the poetry of the speech
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Medieval Poet: Geoffrey Chaucer
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriate selection of similar length passage to accompany the named
lines, e
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lines 1058‒1082
• humorous description of the Wife enjoying the physical appearance of Jankin
as he carries her fourth husband’s coffin, e
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‘me thoughte he hadde a
paire/Of legges and of feet so clene and faire’
• ways in which the Wife’s physical appearance and sensual nature challenges
conventional ideals for women at the time
• ways in which the Wife puts physical appearance and attraction above status
and riches in matters of love, e
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‘But evere folwede myn appetit’
• ways in which the Wife uses euphemisms to describe her physical appearance
and her nature, e
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significance of the ‘Martes mark’ on her face and of it
being in another ‘private place’
• ways in which this passage reflects the Wife’s contradictory nature, e
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her
piety evident in her being on the pilgrimage and her love of physical
pleasures
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The Metaphysical Poets
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany To My Mistress Sitting by a
River’s Side: An Eddy, e
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The Sun Rising
• ways in which Carew uses the natural imagery of water as the central conceit
throughout the poem, e
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channels of water to signify people and relationships
• ways in which narrative structure is used to convey ideas, e
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shift in line 19 to
first-person to create a personal feel to the natural imagery
• ways in which sensuous language of natural imagery is used as typical of
Metaphysical poetry, e
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the mistress’ flirtatious nature is portrayed through how
she ‘courts the banks’; ‘strokes their sides’
• ways in which form and structure represent the natural imagery of the river, e
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use of enjambement and continuous stanza to represent the flow of water
• ways in which the poem reflects the Metaphysical poets’ connection of love with
physical desire
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Metaphysical Poet: John Donne
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany The Apparition, e
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The
Canonization
• Donne’s use of extravagant, dramatic address to express his emotion as
typical of Metaphysical poetry
• ways in which form and structure is used to convey the depth of emotion,
e
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lack of consistent rhyme and metre to mimic the emotional turmoil of the
speaker
• ways in which imagery is used to portray emotion, e
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hyperbolic imagery of
death; sexual imagery of the lover as a ‘feign’d vestal’; description of his
lover as a ‘murd’ress’
• Donne’s emotional plea for revenge in the poem as influenced by Jacobean
revenge tragedies
• ways in which tone of the poem conveys emotions, e
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cool contempt
through use of second person ‘thy’; ‘thou’
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The Romantics
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany Ode on Melancholy, e
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Stanzas Written in Dejection, near Naples
• personification of melancholy as a goddess to suggest she has power and
should be worshipped
• use of natural imagery reflecting the Romantic inclination to use the natural
world to refresh, e
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‘glut thy sorrow on a morning rose’
• ways in which Keats presents melancholy as a necessary part of life and to be
embraced and not ignored, e
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declarative opening to the poem ‘No, no, go
not to Lethe’
• ways in which Keats presents melancholy as fleeting through the
impermanence of life, e
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the metaphor of Joy ‘Bidding adieu’; ‘Beauty that
must die’
• Keats’ use of form and structure to present melancholy, e
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use of ode form
reinforces Keats’ proposition that melancholy is an experience to be
embraced and celebrated
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Romantic Poet: John Keats
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany The Eve of St Agnes, e
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‘Bright Star! would I were steadfast as thou art’
• ways in which desire is the main part of the story of the poem, e
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Madeline’s desire for the magical vision of her love at midnight
• ways in which Keats uses richly descriptive language, reflective of the
Romantic movement’s interest in the medieval, e
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‘Love’s fev’rous citadel’;
‘Brushing the cobwebs with his lofty plume’
• Keats’ use of contrasts to emphasise the desire between Porphyro and
Madeline, e
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bitter chill outside and the warmth of their love and desire;
contrast of Madeline’s family disdain for Porphyro and her love for him
• Keats’ use of sensual imagery to reflect the sensuous desire, e
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candied
fruits and spiced treats
• Keats’ use of form and structure, e
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Spenserian stanzas; use of omniscient
narrator to explore Romantic notions of dreams, sensual pleasure and desire
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xi ‘O let the solid
ground’, e
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Somewhere or Other
• Tennyson’s use of form and structure to present yearning, e
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repetition of
closing lines of stanzas; parallel structure and rhyme of ‘mad’ and ‘sad’
• ways in which Tennyson uses language to show the speaker’s yearning and
desire for love, e
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repetition of ‘sweet’
• ways in which imagery of death reflect internal turmoil of the speaker and
external turmoil of the Crimean War, e
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imagery of ground falling ‘beneath my
feet’
• Tennyson’s use of rhythm and metre, e
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disruption of regular metre with
repetition of ‘quite’ to express the speaker’s yearning
• ways in which Tennyson equates the yearning of the speaker with madness,
typical of Victorian literature
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Question
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Indicative content

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Victorian Poet: Christina Rossetti
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany Twice, e
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Echo
• ways in which Rossetti uses imagery of the heart breaking to convey loss,
e
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‘I took my heart in my hand’; ‘As you set it down it broke’
• ways in which the poem gives voice to the fallen woman of Victorian society,
e
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double judgment of the ‘contemned’ man and of God
• ways in which Rossetti uses natural imagery to portray loss, e
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‘corn goes
brown’; ‘Nor sung with the singing bird’
• Rossetti turning to the comfort of spiritual love as recompense for loss, e
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plea for God to hold her heart and save her from heartbreak
• ways in which Rossetti uses rhythm and metre to emphasise loss and pain of
heartbreak, e
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shorter lines of ‘Yea, judge me now’; ‘Then set it down’
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Question
number

Indicative content

19

Modernism
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany Mowing, e
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Wild Swans
• Frost’s use of imagery, e
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personification of the human-made scythe as it
communicates with the ground
• ways in which the enigmatic relationship between the speaker and nature
reflects the Modernist rather than the Romantic approach, e
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no answer
given to what the scythe whispered
• ways in which form and structure are used to explore the relationship
between humans and the natural world, reflecting Modernist concerns with
decay and fragmentation, e
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sonnet form with its unusual rhyme scheme
• ways in which the abstract and imaginary are combined with the natural to
explore the relationship, e
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‘heat’, ‘sound’, ‘fay or elf’ with ‘flowers’ and the
‘snake’
• ways in which Frost uses language to explore the relationship between
humans and the natural world, e
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repetition of ‘whispered’ and ‘scythe’ to
mimic the sound of the wind and the scythe
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Question
number

Indicative content

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Modernist Poet: T S Eliot
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany Death by Water (The
Waste Land IV), e
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The Love Song of J
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Modernist Poet: T S Eliot
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany Preludes, e
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The Fire
Sermon (The Waste Land III)
• ways in which Eliot presents a negative portrayal of urban life, e
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description of evening as ‘The burnt-out ends of smoky days’
• use of sensual imagery to present urban life, e
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‘smell of steaks’; ‘faint stale
smells of beer’
• significance of the musical allusion in the title and the way it reflects
Modernist use of variation and repetition to explore themes
• ways in which Eliot uses language to present a negative image of the city,
e
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repetition of ‘vacant lots’ to emphasise the lack of development and
urban decay; negative colours of ‘blackened street’; ‘yellow soles’
• use of form and structure to emphasise the isolation of contemporary urban
life, e
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structure of four stanzas in four vignettes to suggest the
separateness of existence in the city
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The Movement
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:
• appropriately selected second poem to accompany Brooklyn Heights, e
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Coming
• ways in which the setting of the poem presents a hopeful approach, e
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‘the
hopeful ozone of a new day’; symbolism of the setting on Sunday morning;
the turn of the century
• ways in which imagery is used to suggest hope, e
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personification of
‘America comes smiling’
• ways in which hope is portrayed as unrealistic, e
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repetition of ‘dream’ to
suggest the image of America may be a fantasy; ‘steamers loaded with
prayers and bundles’ to suggest false optimism
• ways in which structure reveals false hope in the poem, e
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‘hopeful ozone’
in stanza one becomes ‘ozone older than the name of commerce’
• loss of belief and certainty as typical themes of Movement poetry, e
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the
ambivalence of the couplet ‘They jingle the hopeful change in their pockets
…’
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Movement Poet: Philip Larkin
Candidates may refer to the following in their answers:








appropriately selected second poem to accompany Born Yesterday, e
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Next,
Please
ways in which the ordinary is equated with happiness through living a simple
life and being average, e
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‘May you be ordinary’
ways in which Larkin presents ideas through conversational matter-of-fact
tone, e
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‘Not the usual stuff’; ‘Well, you’re a lucky girl’
use of structure and form to convey pleasure in the ordinary, e
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semblance
of second stanza to sonnet with its fourteen lines and concluding rhyming
couplet
contextual links, e
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Larkin’s reputed hatred of his fame and status; the
irony that Sally Amis did not live an ordinary life in the way Larkin presents it
the ironic detachment of Larkin’s tone, typical of his poetry, e
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he wishes
something for her that is actually out of the ordinary ‘I have wished you
something/None of the others would’
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Descriptor (AO1, AO2, AO3)

Level 1

1–6

Descriptive
• Makes little reference to texts with limited organisation of ideas
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• Uses a narrative or descriptive approach that shows limited knowledge
of texts and how meanings are shaped in texts
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• Shows limited awareness of contextual factors
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Aware of some appropriate concepts
and terminology
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• Gives surface readings of texts relating to how meanings are shaped in
texts
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• Has general awareness of the significance and influence of contextual
factors
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Level 3

13–18

Clear relevant application/exploration
• Offers a clear response using relevant textual examples
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Creates a logical, clear structure with few
errors and lapses in expression
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Shows clear understanding of the writer’s craft
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Develops relevant links between texts and
contexts
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Discriminating use of concepts and terminology
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• Demonstrates discriminating understanding of how meanings are
shaped in texts
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• Provides a discriminating analysis of the significance and influence of
contextual factors
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Level 5

25–30

Critical and evaluative
• Presents a critical evaluative argument with sustained textual
examples
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Uses sophisticated structure and
expression
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Displays a sophisticated understanding of the writer’s craft
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Makes sophisticated links between
texts and contexts
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