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Title: External Business Communication Essay
Description: This essay received 73% (1st) at degree level. It analyses external communication, as well as PR etc. in relation to Apple's release of the iPhone 4s (in the case study, "iCommunicator"). The case study can be found here: http://classic.marshall.usc.edu/assets/155/25390.pdf This essay is Harvard referenced and may assist in writing about other company's crisis communication techniques.

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When Apple released their new iCommunicator, 1000s rushed to buy Apple’s new product
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However, customers started to report connectivity problems –
stating that if they touched the antenna on the outside of the phone, they would lose
reception and their calls would drop
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In this essay, I will be analysing and evaluating external communication in relation to Apple
and its release of the iCommunicator
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” (Hartley, P and Bruckmann, C
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2001) External audiences are people outside the organisation: customers, suppliers, unions,
stockholders, potential employees, government agencies, the press and the general public
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An organization's primary public are its customers and employees, but other
stakeholders are crucial to the functioning of an organization
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One poorly worded newsletter or, in the case of Apple, a press
release and customer service, has the potential to ruin a company’s expensive
communication plan and can also affect the company’s revenue as a result
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In the case study, David and Mary experienced problems with their iCommunicator’s
reception and so contacted their service provider AT&T who apologised for the
inconvenience and instructed him to call Apple as it was not a problem with the provider
but the iCommunicator itself
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Communication is the responsibility of all employees in an organization, but several
operational departments have primary responsibility
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But the solutions which they came up with were not to the satisfaction of the customers
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Apple failed to fix the problem immediately even
though customers were complaining in the first week
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Apple then issued a press release, in which they compared themselves to other competing
smart phone devices, including RIM’s Blackberry, and said how connectivity problems were
simply a “fact of life
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” According to Coombs, diminishing posture is “the
communication strategy that tries to picture the organisation is having little control over the
crisis
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Excusing

seeks to frame the organisation as having little to no control of the crisis of the events
leading up to it
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" (Coombs, 2006) Apple essentially dodged the problem entirely and blamed
technology in general, not their own technology or design
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It sets the stage for how
those individuals outside the organisation are likely to make sense of the crisis event
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The main problem with Apple wasn’t the technical malfunction, but the poor attempt Apple
took in tackling the issue
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Rather than taking the blame for the design of the phone, they ignored the problem
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Apple’s poor press release risked losing its brand name
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" (Stuart, Stuart, and Sarow, 2007)
Apple’s mission statement did not say that they would do their best to find a resolution to
the iCommunicator’s antenna problem or replace the phones that the customers had spent
$5,000 on
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We all know that
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” According to Stuart,
Stuart, and Sarow, “a mission statement articulates the goals and objectives of the company
and concisely states why the company exists
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To prevent Apple spoiling their brand image, they
should have done the following things:
1
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Instead of saying “antenna problems are simply a fact of life”, Apple should have made an
apology to the users: for example “We are sorry for the problems that your new
iCommunicator may be causing you” would have been the correct way to address the
situation
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2
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By not tackling their plan of action straight away, the public are more likely to switch over to
a competing smart phone device and lose confidence in Apple as a brand which would affect
the company in the long run
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3
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“When the facts around a crisis are properly explained, customers tend to understand and
are more likely to continue their relationship with the organisation
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“Customers are the lifeblood of any business or organisation
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All of these forms of solution show
the customer that Apple is willing to go above and beyond to satisfy the customers’ needs
and therefore keeps the company’s well-earned brand name
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This would therefore give the company brand loyalty and a
positive long-term gain: their credibility, revenue and market share
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If Apple lost its credibility, it would
therefore lose a part of its market share because of the poor attempt to communicate
externally
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Unsurprisingly, if
Apple lost customers, the company would lose revenue and consequently market share and
Apple’s shareholders would lose value in their stock
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Apple intensified their customers’ discontent with their faulty iCommunicator by
addressing the issue with the public the way they did
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It could
also have a have a negative effect on the employees in the long-run: with the amount of
complaints, customers are very likely to lose their loyalty to the brand and buy their
competitor’s product
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Finally, the
customers: their biggest loss is the $5,000 which they paid for the phone
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If the customer tried to return the defective iCommunicator, they would still be
at a loss because of the restocking fee Apple was charging customers
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Apple made a poor decision in
releasing a defective product, but an even poorer decision in not providing customers with
an immediate solution which satisfied the customers’ needs and not responding proactively
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Many companies suffer from poor communication
skills, which lead them to poor communication decisions
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Good communication skills
lead to a good corporate image, which results in happy stakeholders all round
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(2007) Ongoing Crisis Communication: Planning, Managing and Responding (2nd ed) Thousand
Oaks, CA: Sage
“Diminishing posture: the communication strategy that tries to picture the organisation is having little control
over the crisis
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Excusing seeks to
frame the organisation as having little to no control of the crisis of the events leading up to it
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Crandall, W
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(2009) Crisis management in the new strategy landscape
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“When the facts around a crisis are properly explained, customers tend to understand and are more likely to
continue their relationship with the organisation
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, Spillan, J
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and all, W
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London: Taylor & Francis
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Kitty, Kaczmarek, S
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Title: External Business Communication Essay
Description: This essay received 73% (1st) at degree level. It analyses external communication, as well as PR etc. in relation to Apple's release of the iPhone 4s (in the case study, "iCommunicator"). The case study can be found here: http://classic.marshall.usc.edu/assets/155/25390.pdf This essay is Harvard referenced and may assist in writing about other company's crisis communication techniques.